Penless

Lv3

Loves OP characters.

2021-11-26 入りましたPhilippines

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Penless3 months ago
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No worries enjoying the Story so far
Ch 35 Amithaba
Dual Cultivation God Returns
東方 · DaoistGreenOnion
Penless3 months ago
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Again the usage of phrase with same meaning and context, overdoing this would make it harder to read as the story goes on. It's becoming padding of words
A dangerous light shone in the eyes of this man, as he was consumed by anger at his peaceful life being disturbed, feeling hateful for being humiliated on multiple occasions, disturbed by the actions and changes in his wife, and, feeling something he never thought he would feel, jealousy. He did not believe she had the guts to cheat on him, since she was a woman with strong principles and morals ever since he met her. Her integrity was high and he knew of it, after all, he took advantage of it to tie her to him after she became disillusioned with their marriage. But there was still this imperceptible feeling he got that made him jealous for some reason. And that was not something he was willing to tolerate. Just because he did not have any feelings for her, did not mean he was not possessive toward her.
Dual Cultivation God Returns
東方 · DaoistGreenOnion
Penless3 months ago
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Why keep using phrases with same context to the previous one. this is just spiral of words
He had a feeling that he was losing his position as a man. And although he was usually timid and agreeable in front of her because she controlled his finances, it did not mean he did not have an ego or wild ambitions. In fact, his ego was even bigger than most other men out there, because he managed to obtain a woman that everyone was envious of. Just because he was not recently interested in touching her did not mean he did not regard her as his own.
Dual Cultivation God Returns
東方 · DaoistGreenOnion
Penless3 months ago
に返信 DaoistGreenOnion
good chose
As he finished cultivating, he sensed that he was just a step away from the 1st level of Qi Gathering Realm. As practitioners broke through, it did not mean that they would be in the 1st level of the next realm, they would enter the threshold of the realm, most commonly called gate. Previously, Wu Long was at the gate of Qi Gathering Realm and despite using medicines he used before, he was unable to even come close to advancing to the 1st level. This showed how beneficial this Yin Qi was to him, as he now was almost there.
Dual Cultivation God Returns
東方 · DaoistGreenOnion
Penless3 months ago
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Great 🍋
Ch 37 (R18) Warm embrace
Dual Cultivation God Returns
東方 · DaoistGreenOnion
Penless3 months ago
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the only issue i have with this novel is the seemingly huge info dumping every chapter ruining the flow of the story telling, take for example in this chaoter he was supposed to use sword intent then 5 or so paragraph became spiral of info dumping ruining the flow of action, this might be a bad thing if the action was already in climax then info dumping suddenly entered
Ch 35 Amithaba
Dual Cultivation God Returns
東方 · DaoistGreenOnion
Penless7 months ago
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his morals maybe plus he is dual cultivator, the ideology of his cultivation path and lust cultivators directly opposed each other that's maybe one of the reasons of his disgust
While he never personally knew any people that became victims, he was so disgusted and repulsed with the entire idea that he started being merciless to anyone who practiced it. And as he did so he quickly became their target and had to encounter more and more of them. Hence he naturally learnt more and more about the details, nature of the techniques, and consequences for victims. He also started encountering more and more aftermaths and effects of lust cultivators' actions. Eventually, he was so sickened and revolted that he began persecuting them with passion ever since. That was the beginning of his history with lust cultivation.
Dual Cultivation God Returns
東方 · DaoistGreenOnion
Penless7 months ago
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interesting take on handseal. this should be a dual cultivation novel yet it put other cultivation novel into shame when it comes to cultivation details
All of his veins became visible and bulged as if on the verge of bursting, his skin turned red, and sweat gushed from all over his body, steam began rising from him and his every muscle was twitching and spasming. He then began using a pattern of hand seals that did not contain any Spiritual Qi and were designed to control the processes in the physical body by altering the blood flow in hands. The pattern contained 48 hand seals that he changed with specific speed for each seal, which he then repeated after going through the whole pattern over and over again.
Dual Cultivation God Returns
東方 · DaoistGreenOnion
Penless7 months ago
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Yeah probably
[Strength: 20 (+20) / Agility: 13 / Health: 15 / Stamina: 16 / Mana: 109 / Magic: 109]
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
ファンタジー · XIETIAN
Penless10 months ago
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"Yes, Mama?"
Villain: The Play of Destiny
ファンタジー · FateDevilAce

Higher than Heaven

A 15-year-old boy was running for his life. He found a cave and entered, trying to hide from his pursuer. However, there was an old man inside it and he was put to sleep by the old man for 1000 years. Inside his dream, the old man gave him an inheritance. Inside his dream, he became the supreme being, lived for billions of years and created several powerful techniques that surpass what the old man gave to him. And more importantly, inside his dream, he created his harem! One day he opened his eyes and woke up from his dream. Cover's Graphic Artist: Jhassi For those interested in commission contact his discord id: Jhassi#7643

Penless · 東方

4.5

73 Chs