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the story's pace is good along with small chaps it's quite fun but i would surely suggest to use some grammar corrector app keep up the good work author

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perfect world built although story is just starting but i like where its going, the characters are well defined and author has made the words into imagination keep it up author

very good story thus far i loved the plot twists although i donot read these types but it still kept me hooked till the end good work author make sure to update it regularly

good story thus far, the mc is really good and the author sure has put some thought into this story surely gonna wait for more keep it up author

even i laughed while writing it