Dao_0f_FanFic

woosh

yo? wassup?

Really enjoying your writing, keep up the good work ^^b I also appreciate that you're keeping the protagonist's advancement at a fairly reasonable pace compared to most fics I've seen in the dragon ball setting.

I believe mina calls her yaoyao, and it's yaoyorozu

but it's more annoying to read

extricate maybe? or extract their gaze????

Am I having a stroke? This chapter was very incoherent compared to previous chapters

I meant to reply to your comment but accidentally posted a separate comment on the paragraph, it's just some nifty trivia regarding the number of authors that call blue hair green.

It's the at shade of blue that some languages have a hard time defining. Cyan/Aqua-ish. For instance, in Japanese the kanji used for aqua is the same kanji as the word for green and is commonly spoken as the word for green, that being "midori". The word for "blue" is relatively new in some languages, only being in them ranging from a decade ago to a couple centuries. I doubt that's the case here but it's something to keep in mind with all the fics on this site written in English by people learning English or that have it as a second or third language.

Whistling is just blowing air through a narrow pathway, I can see it being possible with a protomorph or any of the other (insert first half here)-morphs.