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If you can't even get money without the help of the interface, then I'm sure that 'someone' wouldn't be too bummed out when you actually die. They'll just get someone better I guess.

Yup, very big inspiration. In fact, for the first few chapter, it's basically a copy. I made this because I recently read fake red and I really felt it's a shame that it got cancelled.

Yup, a ver big inspiration from Spiderman Fake Red. I just felt it's a shame for it to end early because the manag got cancelled due to insufficient sales.

Writing Quality(3 star)- It's readable, and there are only a few grammar mistakes. I would have given it a four star but sometimes, the author gives very long info dumps that isn't necessary and his descriptions really can't make you visualize well because it's has little descriptions. I also don't like the fact that he uses Shadow Spiderman instead of Spider Noir, which I'm sure he received comments about but the fact he didn't change it shows his laziness.Story Development(2 star)- I personally didn't like the development, the fact he revealed that all of them are just media in his world and the fact that even though he is an OC, he's barely contributing to the plot. It's something I personally don't like. Character Design(2 star): Since this is a fanfic, the character design should have been pretty high but the way the author writes the character feels one dimensional, so I made it lower. Plus, I don't really like the MC. I don't have problems with weak, cowardly, edgy, overpowered, or cool protagonists, what I do care about though is a bland and uninteresting character. That's what this MC is, he's very bland, his personality is not explored, we don't even know his motivations that much. Update Stability(Five Star): Uploads everydayWorld background(Five star): This is a fanfic, so I think it's perfect. Though the world itself in this fanfic isn't explored that much.

Do you really have to say she's seductive? She's a minor and the fact you mention seductive implies that Mark think she's seductive because even though it's from a third POV, it's still focuses on Mark's thoughts.

Oh, then he is somewhat emo. He is certainly gloomy and edgy, but his whole personality is not based around being it, he does show moments of compassion and empathy such as dancing for Kana. The manga is a different story though.

Manipulating his sister is canon tho? If you're trying to comment about how Aqua seems too emo in my fanfic, that's certainly true, because I didn't show his other side's yet, but him being like that toward Ruby is not something I did, it's canon.

Nope, he isn't. He's more human, there just wasn't enough chapters yet for me to show it yet.

Thanks, I feel really flattered and embarrassed by your compliment 😊

Well, he does go in a different path in the next few chapters. You can read those before deciding if you want to drop it.