Giana_San

So far I am absolutely pleased. The plot and world setting are intriguing, and that way of words! It feels so smooth and satisfying reading this, like when you slice butter with a hot knife! (It was the first thing that came to mind). Reading this gave me a lot of inspiration to work on my own story too so I'm grateful. I absolutely recommend this to everyone!

A great novel with lots of potential worth reading. A do enjoy the character development, story is well paced and keeps the reader engaged. Keep up the good work

A truly enjoyable story. The start did a great job of captivating me and forcing me to read more and more. The idea of the story is pretty cool with some interesting characters and your way of wording is very pleasant, keep up the good work!

Rock boy got owned by a goblin for an entire second

Man has been done dirty and devolved into a goblin. This is fun.

Smh my head

Thank you! This made me really happy!

Thank you!!

It is!

Only 3 chapters are out as I'm writing this and so far I'm loving it. I love your way with words. There are a few grammar mistakes but they aren't necessarily bad enough to take away the good experience of reading this story. The descriptions of characters are well written too. I believe this piece is more than decent for a first attempt at writing and I believe it is worth for everyone's time.