NiallStephens
Love to write, hate the publishing industry. Serials are the past and the future, and I want to to create interesting works to make you laugh, cry and love. Keeping the lights on would be nice, too
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I very experimental style, almost literary and completely poetic. It's beautiful to read, if you enjoy that kind of thing, and if you like to read ponderous, philosophical prose, with colourful characters and what appears to be the beginnings of a good story. The writing could use proofing, and the formatting seems strange to my eyes, but it's a good work all the same, even if not specifically to my tastes. I won't be unlocking the paid chapters as a result, but I encourage you to jump on this if you're a fan of descriptive writing that deep-dives in the character's heads, beginning the depiction of the relationships between the characters. Downgraded for poor grammar and a slight confusion as to where and when this story is actually set
Man's still in denial...
What about the ones with nowhere else to go?
My feels :'(
This sentence just repeats the previous paragraph with different words
Okay, that's it, I'm in love xD
Runaway train never goin' back~
This is absolutely excellent. As a writer myself, I can't stop applauding the clever use of techniques like irony, perspective and best of all, the foreshadowing. Everything seems to have foundations somewhere earlier in the story (albeit I only just started paying for chapters so still a long way to go). But that's not even the best part, the best part is the characters. It's easy to tell how long the author spent with these people, fleshing out their desires and virtues and flaws, and it shines through in the work. Each one feels like a real person that I'm getting to know for the first time, and every action they take is authentic based on the arcs given to them. There are a few proofreading errors, but honestly, with this quality, who cares?