AlvarieB

DNF Plot seemed like it was going in a good direction but I couldn't get passed the non-quotation dialog. It was hard to understand if someone was talking, thinking internally, or narrating. Other than that the story was decent.

I will first say that I was enjoying this very much, and so I unlocked the whole book, but unfortunately I regret it. The only issue I had, which was a very big issue for me, was that the chapters were out of order and some chapters were repeats. I couldn't take the back and forth chapters that actually spoiled the story. I enjoyed everything that I read but I regret paying the money for it. BTW the chapters do not start messing up until after the free chapters.

The first and second book are on Galatea under the same title as this. I haven't read/purchased the second yet because I heard it too had a cliffhanger.

Did book 2 have a cliffhanger too?

I was going to purchase it on Amazon but it's only for Kindle, is there another way to read it? I also wanted to reread the first book.

2nd read, still love this chapter.

That was a very short chapter 😔

Glad to see this book has older characters, rather than all teens, barely of age.

Fast paced, which is nice, hopefully it can keep my attention.

Paragraph breaks not chapter breaks.