Venalter
Currently a proofreader and half bake translator in here. if you want some fanfic novel got proofread I can do it for free only if the story is interesting
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You can see how many chapter that i already read, so ill give some head up. MC is what you called brat with background, so you can't say MC too naive because he is. The Development of MC character is too much long for i like but im still try to read it, already 200 but still in Danmachi, its WOW for me.
Please there will be Maya from Mahouka
Emperor domination
who?
Clear Sky
GOOD LUCK AND WELCOME BACK BRO. for new reader this novel novel about otome and hidden dungeon, you can expect good fanfic in here, for you who search smut there will be a lot of them when MC realize or rather done for his family drama. i really like your story but since MC got his first, this story becoming a lot of smut, but i do hope there will be change in new volume
got bored of his skill... is this translated novel?
This novel readable if you just ignore many translator inconsistent with their translate I really expect it this novel has same quality like Doulou Ronin if the Translator fix their translation. - Readable - Many Grammar mistakes on power term in soul land ( Soul Power, Name of beast, Name of items)
Fix
Before I forget I'm gonna write a review here You better fix how to address cultivation level properly and about Techniques level too. I'm know you are using MTL, but please do proof read and fix some words if you do you will get more audience. The best MTL that I know in here is from Kiss Shot with novel called btth simulator
Fix
Let me share my experience about this novel, the first few chapter you will be expecting MC cringe as hell, but after that improved well enough so you can endure it, if you really want to read this novel. There is no grammarly mistake in the translation and i amazed with the dedication of translator. I already read almost 150 chapters and there is little romance till here, didnt know about upcoming chapter and the so called NTR from other reviewer. I will give this novel translation 5 stars 1. Readable 2. I like HI3 3. Story is quite good 4. I like HI3 5. Expecting Harem ( feel that will be inc**t 6. I like HI3
if this the result of your editing
his change from mature to childish so fast as author make a MC ML