Laycans
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Laycans3 years ago発表ff's premise is interesting, but I don't think I managed to captivate readers as the author expressed the narrative of the story. ----------------------
- Laycans3 years agoコメント
the story is too confusing for me, i can't connect to it, just advice that most people who read ff keep reading a story when i can understand which course the world in question is following mainly yours and it's hard to follow since '2 protagonist' I don't have anything against it, it just seemed like I don't have a chronology, each chapter seems incongruous with each other
- Laycans3 years agoに返信 KyuuSushi
This is a description of how I felt reading the end of the chapter.
- Laycans3 years agoに返信 FlammableFire
I was thinking about it
- Laycans3 years agoコメント
why attack the chest you know it's in the head that kills
この章は削除されました。 - Laycans3 years agoコメント
he is as strong as a low class satan?
この章は削除されました。 - Laycans3 years agoコメント
why does he do it for himself? 4 years and nothing
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