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Rogue_Deity3 years agoコメントdukio, hello.hello[img=recommend]
- Rogue_Deity3 years agoに返信 de_Nikolaus
but how will we do it?
この本は削除されました。 - Rogue_Deity3 years agoコメント
I was eagerly waiting for someone to do it.
この本は削除されました。 - Rogue_Deity3 years agoコメント
that would be highly appreciated.
この本は削除されました。 - Rogue_Deity3 years agoコメント
thank you for your motivation, reader san.
この本は削除されました。 - Rogue_Deity3 years agoコメント
there is no need to explain so much in starting para
- Rogue_Deity3 years ago発表
the writing style is detailed and logical. the world background is interesting and hooks the reader's attention. just the paragraphs are a bit lengthy and could be simplified to refine an even more immersive version of the content. overall the story development is good and has a high potential to create a masterpiece. just give it a try, who might know you would be hooked in the first chapter.
- Rogue_Deity3 years ago発表
hello there, author here. I am not a professional writer but will thrive to be one someday. the story is intricated and enjoyable as it flows, there might be grammatical errors or writing style that could be improved so plz casually suggest whatever you feel like. with your help, the immersion of the story will increase with your experience as a reader.
この本は削除されました。 - Rogue_Deity3 years ago発表
the author states about the omnipotence of science but the story has its foundation built on fantasy, system, and martial arts. is this what science is about? the writing style is rather good. the prologue and the plot kinda feel controversial and if someone is ok with it then he should definitely give it a try.
- Rogue_Deity3 years agoコメント
why do I get the feeling that the angle has become sassy.
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