OldBone
Just your friendly neighborhood writer.
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Need more work on writing quality, especially on using passive and active voice. Points of View are also important in order to know who is speaking and to whom. It is also essential to describe the scene well and make sure that the picture you want to show is conveyed well. Update stability is quite well, but it is better to have a strict schedule. This habit is important when you want to cater to fans. This might be the least fan service an author can do and it is good to develop early on. You might do it for fun now, but retaining loyal readers is hard. Story development couldn't be judged within 7 chapters based on your pace so no need to worry for now. Character designs are confusing, please describe them with utmost devotion, and don't just throw in a mob without a prior character setting. The world is also important so you can't skimp on it. You might be writing tropes that are common, but what makes your novel different is defined by your character design and world-building. How you showcase the world and package it as well as how you play the characters will make your novel distinguishable. LEARN while writing.
A4 is a paper size usually used in offices.
poor monsters... nochance of becoming juicy gods
what a typical Asian mom
dropped
he can actually monopolize the energy industry
The Fool that doesnt belong to this era. The King of Yellow and Black that Wields good luck.
kek... weeds and cracks
Amon had stolen time
if theres a 911th floor, that would be mindblowing...
Amon and Adam's mom...
He should pray to the King of Yellow and Black that wields good luck
but it was also said that it supersedes the setting.
surprise surprise you'll see a foggy sky that conceals the Western Continent
more like... I applied for us
This Long Yuehong is plenty annoying. please die for the plot's sake
pakyu
isnt this copy-pasted.