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Honestly don't really like the whole dating arc. But in a story sense rather than any critical reason. It is well-written as usual, Naomi is interesting but she's also very boring, which is appropriate as she's a background character. Not everyone needs to be special snowflakes, but everyone has a life of their own, which is evident in Naomi. I like how she doesn't immediately drool over Akira(unlike so many fics ugh) and how Akira isn't really charming to her, and comes of as a bit childish. This felt really good to read. Very organic. But I think everyone(including the Hokage) coming to congratulate them was a bit out of pocket, and kinda weird. Had to do a double take and check if I wasn't reading an omake lol.
Sukuna can't do that. It's more like he manifests the Shikigami partially in the shadows. Like, the wheel halo thing, where he kept Mahoraga in his shadow, but only allowed his wheel to manifest, so Unlimited Void was adapted to by Mahoraga from within the shadow. Or when he manifested the elephant partially in the shadow between his closed palms to pull off Choso's move but with water. He can't use their powers for himself.
Ur a really great writer dude. Amazing ideas and adequate execution. I hope you go on to improve your art enough to gain a distinctive refined style that makes u one of the top writers on the internet. Everything is amazing, but something feels a bit lacking. Take this with a grain of salt, as its just some random lazy normie who can't gather up the determination to write his own fic is telling you, but I feel like ur story and characters are great, but the prose itself feels, idk why, lacking, like it can't keep up with the amazing story. Its like a webnovel typical writing style, which compared to your amazing story feels pretty shabby.
Ahh the religious zealot thing was that I was referring to the fact that Zenith could've been crueller to Lilia and her baby because they were 'born' of sin or some nonsense. And its been a while since I read the fic so I'm kinda now feeling that Zenith was the one who had to compromise the most and now feel bad for her. Both Paul and Lilia did something scummy but got off lightly. Maybe its because I haven't properly witnessed any appropriate punishment one can incur upon their loved ones yet in my life, I don't really know how the author could've solved the situation without breaking up the family and only by twisting characters to maintain the status quo.
Isn't this on fanfic.net? Is this a crosspost? Chiraruscuro or something right?
I'd like to reiterate my point. It is the power to alter space. If I'm not wrong, the author seems to be under the misconception that Limitless slows things down in time as it nears Gojo, which is wrong. It actually just increases the distance between thing by dividing it infinitely, forcing the object to traverse through the infinite fractional divisions generated within a non infinite space.
The one who started this thread, is kinda way too much of a flamer that I wonder if they're just doing it for the trollz. They do try to review in a constructive manner, but that's buried under the mountains of what seems to be raging misanthropism and sometimes racism. It's rather discouraging to see, and this fella seems to hate every fic they see. I wonder what they're trying to find on a place like webnovel, which is a cesspool of poorly written power fantasies and harems. I'd recommend them to simply turn of their brain in order to enjoy the webnovel experience. I too have mixed feelings about this fic. I liked it in the beginning, but I came for the story not the horni bits which are weird due to thing about Rudeus still being 9 to10 years old in this one. Sure you can say he aged up from magic/fucky space time warp shenanigans or whatever but he still hasn't experienced the extra years thay were tacked onto him and I don't know about others, but that seriously bothers me. It just reminds me of the lolibaba justifications that some fellas keep doing. Whenever I keep seeing the romance bit I always feel that the story is getting worse. But honestly speaking this opinion is very, very subjective and leaving aside the thing about not-shota Rudeus, this story is kinda solid. The Author does adhere to the canon timeline, but he does twist it in new manners I haven't seen in any other MT fic. They try to maintain coherency and the MC does kinda feel actually smart, even if the author does glorify Rudeus a bit much. This is ultimately fanfiction and the author shouldn't think too much of what the reviewers think of them, because ultimately those who seriously criticize fanfictions in a hateful manner are simply either trolling for fun or living under delusions because it's fanfiction, the author is ultimately not a professional nor they're ought to provide the best story possible just because the readers want them to.
You do understand that canon Zenith also accepted Lilia and without even as much effort as Rudeus took in this fic. She's a Millis worshipper, but she's not some kind of religious zealot who would be heartless enough to abandon a pregnant jobless woman to her fate, a woman she has known intimately for quite some time. And this Rudy also helped along the process by mentioning what Paul did to Lilia all those years ago, single handedly ruined her life and ran off without taking any responsibility.