Ashish_Kumar_5470

Write something!.... Hhnb. .............................................................................................................................

Best beginning with gamer system in lotm . Awaiting updates. Loved the first two chapters.............. ............................................................................................................................

Good one ……………………………………………............. ............................................................... ....................rhnhgfg.......

Like this. "As I continued to walk through the city, my thoughts were swirling around my mind like a tornado. I couldn't shake off the feeling of being completely alone and without any support. But, I knew I couldn't give up. I had to take control of my life and embrace this new adventure with both arms. The thought of meeting Steve Rogers, aka Captain America, filled me with a sense of excitement and nervousness. I knew that he would be a valuable ally, and his experience and knowledge could help me immensely. However, at the same time, I was intimidated by the idea of meeting a legend and possibly falling short of his expectations" . I can feel my toe curl besides dude is a gamer .but he is feeling lonely. F**k u to MC

1.Plot is same line by line. 2. Main Character is kinda fake u know like monologue are written in cringeworthy words. BS about responsibility and justice. He is acting like 10 year old with power ,and plot knowledge does not change anything for the story. He got nerfed too. Basically a comic character not an ordinary person. 3. Worldbuilding is copy paste of original content. If you like western fantasy character which struggle needlessly and overcome them by plotarmor this is for u. Note. Guys these are my opinions not actual fact. Most people like these kind of story with weak MC but that's not for me. I really don't like flowery words in it. Like. " "

I like these kind of fics which are mix of moderate system content and new plot Specially in Harry Potter. It's good that she doesn't get too strong too fast but also doesn't feel like getting beaten by everyone like American protagonist.( usually in American novels protagonist is weaker than antognist and reverse for Chinese light novels)

I basically don't like mc. He got shot so he forms team with them. Super passive mc against antagonist. Tried almost 20 chapters but couldn't get through.

More chapters please ,.......... .............................................. .............................................. ..,......................mmm...........