OVERALL THE STORY WAS TOO GOOD. THE STORY DEVELOPMENT, THE PRESENTATION ARE PERFECT. ALL THE BEST FOR MORE. ALSO THE OTHER WORKS OF YOU ARE GOOD. KEEP IT UP BRO! [img=update][img=update]
YUPP! THE PLOT WAS SOO GOOD👍 ! KEEP IT UP. IT WAS A QUITE DIFFERENT AND RARE. I LIVE IT SO MUCH. I CAN SEE THE AUTHOR'S EFFORTS.AND FINALLY ALL THE BEST😇[img=update]
A nice story with a good concept. Some minor mistakes should be once corrected. Overall, it's a nice one with detailed explanation. Waiting for more.......
Nice concept with good quality of writing . Characterization is good. And there are some minor errors that should be corrected. Overall the content is nice.
There Agent Theo ( street hero ) was chased by some people in cars and bikes with weapons. Suddenly Theo's car was stopped due to low fuel. The place the car was stopped is a tourist place, Louvre Pyramid (The pic of this place is in the paragraph comments). Theo came out of his car. The chasers also came out of their vehicles.
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