The story felt as if you didn’t necessarily plan the development thoroughly at parts. Therefore, we got situations where you would introduce a piece of information that contradicts what we previously new only for you to come back a couple chapters later to patch up. Then the lack of substantial chapters. Some were good, some were a little dull and felt like fillers that brought nothing but chapter count. Not something uncommon for these sites as authors tend to try to provide consistent updates. Just a couple of areas to be aware of for future writings. Not a bad story.

Fairly rough at the beginning, but does a get a little better. Was a decent story to pass some time; however, the inconsistencies in story development is a bit of a turnoff.

Brain dead author

Author is brain dead

Average read. The story has some negatives like grammar and writing consistency, but outside of that the story is basic and falls under a widely liked trope.

Good. Graduating finally🕶️

Mr. Helia_King is taking things a little serious out here.

Honestly, just for the title. “Strongest Couple” then becomes Harem. Ya, no. Especially with a Harem of 5+ and R18… no. The title is too misleading. It isn’t a fiction about a couple, but a fiction about a degenerate who got a chance at power.

Definitely Rattata

Think twitter, YouTube profiles. You have a profile pick and the header/banner for your profile page.

Might as well go for it. Planet of the apes with Sun Wukong as the leader.

+1

Reading comprehension my guy. This is the authors story, what isn’t his work and imagination isn’t his creation. The guy above isn’t saying that the myth isn’t creative. He is saying that the author is being contradictive by rendering an already existing creation. In all, what we have read so far is so bland and unimaginative that it warrants no reason to continue reading. Its practically verbatim. I personally am only sticking around to see if the author can develop the story well. If the current development continues, there will be no reason in reading any further.

Solid. The grammar is inconsistent with multiple areas that cause some confusion. However, for the most part, the story plays with some generic plot points that maintain an entertaining story. However, the yandere aspect of the harem can be a little bit of a turn off since it is very dramatized.

Author is posting on Scribblehub as well. I don’t know about anywhere else though.

… he should really be working on technique here. He is physically too strong for them to do much harm. Should be holding back in order to adapt and analyze these individuals that have been actually trained in fighting techniques.

A paid internship in 2003… I take what I previously said back. She hit the jackpot.