storyteller101

after reading all 39 chapters i can officaly say this is the best football novel ive read very original and i love the fact that this novel is taking place in the the 80s

its a good novel and the pacing is ok ive read most football novels on this app and some advice would be dont make him op when he reaches a point that he can win thr champions league dont make him win it every time its boring and its ok for the mc to lose it makes it more realistic and entertaining. if you read the book expecting him to win every trophy its boring so make lose finals,semis and so on lets say he does like zidane and wins a cl treble intead of winning all the trophys hell come third in the league stuff like that. another thing is dont let him have messi and ronlado nobody wants to see that.

please never drop this its one of the most original and interesting football novels on this site

what season is the mc in and are there gonna be real players in the future. other than that its a good novel up to now

really like the story can we get more than 1 chapter a week

this is one of the best fanfics ive read hope you carry on writing this

every time i want to read a free book its this stupid shit

im really liking this story has a really good story as of now and i hope you dont drop it in the future

its a good novel but the development is too slow 200 chapter and hes not even a chunin

i like where the story is going it sems pretty interesting .............................................................................................