TheDeadslayer

The gods in danmchi cannot be lied to, unless you have something to help you hide or disguise your lie, such as an ability or item.

Very Ai this writing right?

Gabite and garchomp are not weak to water. Dragon type resists water type

Thank you for translating this in such a good way, I always wanted to read this thing, but every time I looked for it the texts were very disordered or many were not understood because there were many Chinese idioms, as would be obvious, so I never got around to reading it, but thanks to you, now I will do it. (Google Translate)

I was waiting a bit to make the comment in case something changes, but since I already think that nothing is going to change, I think so I say it, to begin with, that Ho-oh cannot revive people who have been dead for a while is quite false, I would say on my part. , you are leaving him as useless, I would say, and if not, why not the gods related to life and death? -_-, although all this is irrelevant because it is mew no ho-oh or any other god, but as you mentioned I will just leave it there, now, for my part I will say that bringing back a reborn bastiodon It is very disgusting, I would say that what defines a being of something material is its experiences, its experience in life, its memories, if it does not have any of the above, it is another separate being, and to finish what caused everything This, for my part, was felt, well, honestly, very forced, and I would even say useless, considering that Marco was a character to whom you did not dedicate almost any chapter or anything, I would say (or at least it was quite irrelevant in what I have read), and why? force a change in the main character?, to give him a "UNIQUE" lesson on what life is like?, for a shocking plot twist?, please don't joke, pretty bad, if maybe you would have done it in a situation in which no one could have been saved, in which it is very possible that the protagonist with his pokemon were about to die and there was no other option than someone to sacrifice themselves (immolate), perhaps it would have been less forced and everything, and therefore favor on an island controlled by the rokect team to select a supposed executive to pass all this?, and that on the island controlled by the rokect team the god that this is mew of all the pokemons, it had to be mew, even knowing everything The history he has with the Rokect team, do you think it's possible? Honestly, for my part, I think this part is very poorly developed, not the death itself, but the way you did it was quite cheap, it gives me the feeling that you didn't even want to write.

Well, I would rather say that the weakness of movements of this type that do not directly hit the opponent are other movements such as taunt that do not allow you to use anything other than direct damage, there are also some skills that affect that, or pokemon with skills like mischievous heart.

Golduck psychic type XD

the work is not really for me, it is (in my opinion) too repeatable to other works that I have already read, something more original was not sought, I do not know what I really expected, but what I do know is that at the moment in which rwby characters began to appear one after another as fruit vendors I knew this was not for me, and honestly people seem to care more if it's a "harem" and what the mc's love interests are than the story itself , which is bad? I guess, I say it's not your fault, it's just that I was expecting something else, something that surely on this site (webnovel) surely not, good luck I guess.

Too much "hehe"

Honestly, this doesn't serve me as a fanfiction r18, nor as a serious story, it's too little descriptive in the parts r18, and they usually go by very quickly, it gives you the feeling of more than having read an r18 chapter, you read a synopsis, and as a serious story there are some inconsistencies, like the fact that you can't lie to a god, or the fact that you can control at level 4 being a measly level 1, or the fact that it took you longer to beat a minotaur that to the infantile dragon, etc. Well, good luck with your writing, I guess.