Wao que simp

no los es, primer capítulos ya se puede sabe que mc en patatico

Hey, para cuando vas actualizar tu libro

Si igual

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Eso no es Yandere

I think no

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why someone says they have to do something MC they have to do it (it doesn't make sense).don't you question them?

What level of strength does Ye Fan have?

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It's hard to read if you put everything with this '......' only used for thoughts, this is for speech''......"

Where can I find them?

Mucho relleno

Understood! To enhance the handling of the canon, they could explore time jumps with brief summaries to avoid predictability. Avoiding unnecessary filler and staying focused on relevant events could help maintain interest. As for humor, it could be more organic to the theme, adapting to the situation and characters to avoid forcing it, allowing it to flow naturally.

It has to improve in some way, for example, make the fight faster (create what the outcome will be) or make it more entertaining, the issue of canon, and focus on the development of the main character.

MC in how very passive.

MC, parece que se olvidó rápido de la hermana