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All theses negative comments.jeez . I like the plot so far. I dislike the immunity aspect though. Resistance would be better than slowing evolve to immunity. But hey that’s my personal opinion. Also I believe he at the right level of strength for the plot. I can’t believe people want he to be op at he’s age . It would be to boring if could kill Kage level in a year or two. Keep up the good work author.

Hmmm let see how this goes . I’ve seen other fanfic add mana and turn out horrible . But so far this novel is great . So I’m hoping for the best .

Go back not come back

Seriously haki ??? I get it, I really do . Take inspiration from it but change the name .

First to be changed to faster

The grammar is killing me . Sigh great potential. But I’m leaving . It’s giving me a headache just to read this. Good luck

Sigh . I’m giving it a my 10 chapter rule after a horrible chapter . Hopefully it will get better. Keep up the good work . Even though I know I’m 4 years behide lol .

Eva is the oldest daughter and Elsa is the youngest. I could be mistaken . But I’m pretty sure I’m right

To be honest . I don’t like the story itself but that’s my personal opinion. Beside that point , it’s has originality and it’s own uniqueness. It’s a very interesting read. Keep working hard arthor.