WillowWhite
Lv10
I wonder. I wander. I write.
2021-07-29 入りましたUnited States
21h
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7瞬間
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WillowWhite2 years agoコメントMarry me. This is the best description I’ve ever read in my life.
- WillowWhite2 years agoコメント
There’s always a bird, I swear. 😂
- WillowWhite2 years agoコメント
Very well set up prologue. I can’t wait to read more!
- WillowWhite2 years agoコメント
Ooooh goosebumps! Love this!
- WillowWhite2 years agoコメント
“Her synapses flashing with anger” gave me such a cool visual!
- WillowWhite2 years agoコメント
Great start! Way to set up the tragedy of the main character, excited for him to show them who’s boss and become a big league. I like how you introduced the mysterious being right before chapter end to keep us wanting more!
- WillowWhite2 years agoコメント
Why did she forget?
- WillowWhite2 years agoコメント
Here’s where we remember he’s a kid. 😂
- WillowWhite2 years agoコメント
Brilliant.