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Hello readers, whotfiam here. While currently reading all the chapters that I wrote, I noticed that a lot of words needed improvement about my writing. I was too focused about the story that I forgot to be descriptive about their expression and such. I'll try my best to learn and improve.
the story have a lot of potential I read the first chapter and Im really hooked up. I suggest that you add more to your chapter I think its too short but overall its good. keep up the good work ðª
Thank you so much! Appreciated your reviews. Hope you have a great day ð
Truck-kun once again.
Thank you so much! I'll give my best even I only have small readers.
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