when I come across typos or wrong word choice/phrase, I mention it using: "*corrected*" instead of "reg"; *corrected; reg ⏭ corrected My way of assisting non-native English authors sound more fluid
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my thoughts exactly
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a bit repetitive, if you ask me
if he's suspecting that his 'bad luck' might be because of the rod rewarded by the system; I'm surprised he hasn't considered that perhaps ALL the fishing related rewards from the system might be causing his 'bad luck'
MCs never aim for Master, they just easily achieve it & more
fled » flee
bolted » bolt
kids? again i thought the little boy was the only 'kid' present
by "KIDS" is MC referring to his "fishing buddies" & the little boy? or did some other children suddenly arrive & catch fish in the amount of time that it took for MC to reel in & open the "package" ?