Noven_1145
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Trash. It's not worth reading. The quantity of plotholes is too high, fck with how dense the plotholes are within a single chapter i could form a fcking blackhole. The progress is not proportional to reality. He should not be progressing so slowly. Author is just trying to drag out the story.. dissapointing... 0/10. I can't give it a 0 but you get the lowest rating there is, a 1. Don't give ur MC op abilities if you're not gonna let him abuse it. And if you're not gonna let him abuse it, don't do i through plot holes??! At least explain the reason why!? don't leave it up to us. Why is his progress so freaking slow? I'm done. Just a waste of time. You want an mc with slow progress you don't give him an op system. This ruined the story for me. It just gets so irritating. Plus u get an L/10 for botting reviews. Loser.
Subpar writing quality, subpar character design, great world background, good story development. But it got boring real fast when you started info dumping. MC is edgy and not befitting someone who survived true horrors. MC also suffers from a major case of pushover syndrome. It is greatly dissapointing and does not live up to the potential it showed in the first 120 chapters. 👎🏻
If I'm going to be honest. This story sucks you in, it's great, you know? It really just sucks you in and you really feel .. i don't really know how to describe it, its good and I know that. The only real complaint i have is a personal one and not something about your writing quality. Honestly I really prefer overpowered/ relatively strong mc's. I know that for most, it feels more fulfilling when you see a hard-working MC gain power. VS an OP MC. But i just can't really get myself to like weak-to-strong stories. This is again no more than personal preference and in no way a criticism of your writing. I'm normally really critical, but i just can't find something to dislike. The characters don't feel like characters; they feel like real people. It's as though the scene is happening before my very eyes. The world building is fabulous, though the concepts aren't exactly original. I can't complain about that, I'd prefer it if they weren't. The writing quality is top-notch as it reads like a professionally written story. The plot is great, though I can't exactly comment much on the plot and the world building because I'm barely 20 chapters in.
That would also be my response