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Bumbleboi

Bumbleboi

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I am new to writing. I wont ask you to like my work but please give me your honest review so that i can improve myself. Thank you

2021-07-10 入りましたIndia
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  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi2 years ago
    に返信 Mr_BLack

    and what about the manga, is it continuing? And how did you get it serialized? did the studio contact you or the artist?

  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi3 years ago
    発表

    Dude..........your writing improves every passing chapter.........thats natural though.........but if you have time give a read through previous chapter and correct some of the mistakes or maybe you can make it even more impressive. The plot is actually quite chilling................ just dont give it a romance aspect please that will ruin that chill in it..................make it as manipulative as you can............thats what we lack rn............ This story is a total thrill ride

  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi3 years ago
    発表

    Thank you everyone for supporting me till the WPC. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. please do tell me what I wrote wrong and how I can improve it. thank you

  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi3 years ago
    発表

    don't use many names in the story and what to say the story has 2 chapters rn.............so ATB to progress it.........when there are a pile of chapters to read i will be back

  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi3 years ago
    発表

    I won't do a false review here....You will improve as you write more chapters......well everyone does so but your story progressed a little fast for the first chapter and normal after that and it was good as fast paced chapters keep you more hooked.......currently on chapter 3.........well just a personal request but please write long chapters like around 1500-2000 words atleast as sometime leaving a cliffhanger makes the OP loose interest but i personally liked the stories as it is unique but even if you turn it into cliche it will be good........as cliche is imp for life

  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi3 years ago
    に返信 DARKNEWBIE

    thank you very much[img=update][img=update]

  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi3 years ago
    発表

    guys please give me power stones so that i can win the WPC 286 I have the highest views but due to lack of power stones my rank is 5 my novel is Genghis khan's Acolyte- A Rising Havoc https://www.webnovel.com/book/genghis-khan's-acolyte--a-rising-havoc_23328009505896005

  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi3 years ago
    発表

    Well let me be honest.........I don't read these virtual MMO games stories anymore........but what kept me to your story isn't that its your writing style dude...........Its legit good..........Even if you make a mess in the story later on I promise your writing quality will save you for sure......keep writing stories and i will actively follow them.......

  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi3 years ago
    に返信 Loctovia

    thank you very much loctovia :)

  • Bumbleboi
    Bumbleboi3 years ago
    発表

    the story is good and all but please show some more POV of main character as it gets boring with many dialogues. and it is quite good if you improve that aspect. give a try to my novel as well https://www.webnovel.com/book/genghis-khan's-acolyte--a-rising-havoc_23328009505896005