FavourEkele_1969
I'm Batman Read [My Predator System] on Meganovel Username: DanTheLion
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FavourEkele_19691yrに返信 Raito_KawariCh 1 Chapter 1- FavourEkele_19691yr発表
The grammar is fantastic, albeit some errors, it's still polished...great buildup, amazing character, world building, thrilling action scenes which is outstanding amongst other qualities...I feel the premise could have been as compelling as the progressive chapters (2)... but I sense that this is a book no one should miss. it's got potential and there is still room for improvement.[img=recommend]
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Grammar's decent. Progression's a bit slow. The tension's a little overwhelming. IMHO, the FL is overbearing as h*ll. But she is a bit relatable. The male lead has guts, appeal and stuff. I understand this is a cop novel but I don't really enjoy excessive vulgarity. The character POV's a turnoff but I understand it does capture the attention of readers' that it's looking for. just work on making them less annoying. I really hope the story thrives beyond author's expectations.
- FavourEkele_19691yrに返信 BrewingFantasiesCh 1 Chapter 1: The beginning
- FavourEkele_19691yrに返信 Dortexus
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It was sunny today on the seventeenth of April. Maks Anderson checked his phone for the current weather report and it just passed 87 degrees. - FavourEkele_19691yrに返信 NLinCH
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"21...22....23...24....25...20..." - FavourEkele_19691yrに返信 NLinCHCh 1 Chapter 29: Confessions
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- FavourEkele_19691yrに返信 reader_iamCh 7 We get sporty I guess
- FavourEkele_19691yrに返信 Metalloid
my point exactly
Since I don't remember my name, more like I don't remember anything personal, I remember what and when I did things, but I don't remember...me?(name, age, family…), so I got a new one. And since I love beasts, I was looking for the wolf shifter, but color me surprised, I found that not only there is wolf shifter but other kinds too, I mean there is a giraffe, horse, mise and other shifters there, probably have something related to "AU" part, so I chose the king of the jungle. And for the talent part, it allow me to choose 3 from A LONG list 'I wish they put a search function there, so I chose scientist talent that gives a boost on any science learning experience, a crafter talent that makes me genies in making things, perfect combo with scientist if I say, and last one cause I love arts from all colors, so why not? - FavourEkele_19691yrに返信 NLinCH
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"Sweet Mother of Vengeance," He said and his glasses fell down his head, his legs quivered as he walked. - FavourEkele_19691yr発表