LaxenBrie

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Budding writer that's trying their hands in the fantasy genre.

2021-07-08 入りましたUnited States

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LaxenBrie8 days ago
に返信 DaoistK1kEJo
thanks for the feedback I'll get to editing soon.
The cart holding the dragon is easy to spot the closer she gets to it. The sight of Sir Gibraltar barking orders to the fellow knights in the area comes into view relatively quickly with her pace. The words he was saying passively being ignored by Zarracen while the lesser ranked knights ran around to quickly finish up tying down the dragon and reinforcing the cart for the journey. As Sir Gibraltar takes a bag from a nearby squire she arrives to the seen.
Steps of the Dragon Knight
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LaxenBrie8 days ago
に返信 DaoistK1kEJo
You are correct it's the opposite for each warriors go down and mages go up
"You Tier 1's can self heal right that should pick you up?"
Steps of the Dragon Knight
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LaxenBrie9 months ago
に返信 DripLucci
Thank you for the review and keep the grammar in mind as I go back through it.
Steps of the Dragon Knight
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LaxenBriea year ago
に返信 ChaosOmega98
Thanks for reading!
Ch 2 The First Step
Steps of the Dragon Knight
ファンタジー · LaxenBrie
LaxenBriea year ago
に返信 jon_the_Nation
nah I don't a loaf of slice bread don't last long enough in my house to be refrigerated
Opening the fridge, I of course am bombarded by the smell of rotting meat, due to the lunch meat being kept in it. But, ignoring that, I find a couple more bottles of water, as well as an unopened two liter of coke, and an opened two liter of Dr. Pepper. Though, there's only about a cup left of the Dr. Pepper. I also find a loaf of moldy bread in there… Seriously? Who keeps bread in the fridge?
The Walking Dead: Warlord
テレビ · Sorrest
LaxenBriea year ago
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see this is how you make people feel better after saving someone else's life I the afterlife. hear that Botan I'm giving you the 👀
"Yes, you did. One of the people whose life you saved would turn out to be the person to find a cure for lung cancer, saving the lives of millions. Another would go on to start a company focused on feeding people in less developed countries, saving the lives of tens of thousands. Inadvertently, you saved the lives of well over one million people. You may not have a legendary tale that will be told forever, but you died a heroic death."
The Walking Dead: Warlord
テレビ · Sorrest
LaxenBrie2 years ago
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Loving this book. author sets the stage well.
The Only Good Orc is a Half-Orc
ファンタジー · Braderzsz
LaxenBrie2 years ago
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yo she wild 😳 for asking that 🤣
"Have there been or will there be any mating rituals between the two of you that I can observe?"
The Only Good Orc is a Half-Orc
ファンタジー · Braderzsz
LaxenBrie2 years ago
に返信 DaoistP66AIs
He's a certified idiot
Ch 26 The Morning - Part 3
The Only Good Orc is a Half-Orc
ファンタジー · Braderzsz
LaxenBrie3 years ago
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a person who thought about defensible positions
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Steps of the Dragon Knight

The hero returns to the empire a dragon’s corpse dragged back. Armor askew. They trudge their way back body tired and broken. Home. They expect gratitude. They expect many things like a higher title. What they did not expect was to become the Royal Guard for the First Princess of the Ixmtaraza Empire. Isabella Desdemona. The hero is pulled into confusing politics and relationships within the castle walls. While without the empires converge and allies are made that could break the Ixmtaraza Empire. 18+ for excessive violence and other triggering content.

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