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Well, you actually did offend Bai, so dont act suprised.
OG reader right here.
Hello! Thanks for your support and your help with correcting I appreciate it. I corrected some of the things you mentioned in pervious chapters but the comments were sadly deleted by the changes made to the paragraphs. Thanks for the help c:
I hope you liked the idea of the magic system and its theory. Even if you don't understand it now the ideas will be more explained in later chapters since Eric will start researching the workings of magic. :smile:
¡Gracias por tu comentario! Me alegra saber que disfrutaste del capítulo y te gusta el sistema de magia. Ha sido emocionante desarrollarlo y me complace que esté siendo bien recibido. Espero que continúes disfrutando de la historia. ¡Gracias nuevamente por tu apoyo y tus amables palabras!
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Ye probably. I have no idea
The reason why I added the OC was simple for the plot and story purposes as he will replace some of the characters in the story. I decided that the characters I removed from now MAY be introduced in the next year. But it's true that I totally forgot about Millicent Bullstrode as I don't have any knowledge of him. But I will be careful in the future when I remove some characters. Thanks for the feedback.
Not exactly but kinda similar.