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RuffyRaph7dコメントIt's really cool to see stuff like this, it's like taking a dip back into history class or smth
Did you find it cool or lame?- RuffyRaph13dコメント
That's really cute.
Dark Maid - RuffyRaph14dコメントHer strongest skill is masturbation.
- RuffyRaph14dコメントJust a victim of the strongest characters in the verse.
- RuffyRaph16dに返信 RookofBlack
Quite a few quirks make you practically disabled too
Hearing the gunshot, the others shrieked in fear. This was kind of uncalled for since guns weren't that all-powerful considering many have awaken quirks. - RuffyRaph16dコメント
Again, Ash
この段落は削除されました。 - RuffyRaph16dコメント
Ash* not Ace
この段落は削除されました。 - RuffyRaph19dに返信 0Klein_amon0I will miss the guy since he's pretty fun to hang around.
- RuffyRaph19dに返信 AgentMonke
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Ace laid on the bed, staring at the ceiling in a daze. Elesa laid on his chest, "Oh… Oh! Wow…" Ace let out a breath and stroked her back, "That…" she muttered, "That was the best!" Ace's eyes twitched. - RuffyRaph19dコメント
We praise Sumugulu Arcnotchtad III
Congratulations, Paulcait! You figured it out! You really have an eye for translated works! I have no doubts you'll be the head of the FBI's ancient Translation team! Sorry, everyone. I've been found out. This story has to be credited to it's original writer! Sumugulu Arcnotchtad III, written around 13,000 years ago! - RuffyRaph19dコメント
Larvitar is born deep under the ground. To come up to the surface, this Pokémon must eat its way through the soil above. Until it does so, Larvitar cannot see its parent's face.
Fun fact; Larvitar can eat rocks, dirt, ores, metals, anything. Apparently, if you let it, it will eat a whole mountain! Don't look at the Pokedex entry… It's really sad. - RuffyRaph19dに返信 AgentMonke
real?
Ace laid on the bed, staring at the ceiling in a daze. Elesa laid on his chest, "Oh… Oh! Wow…" Ace let out a breath and stroked her back, "That…" she muttered, "That was the best!" Ace's eyes twitched. - RuffyRaph19dコメント
It breaks my heart to do this to you
Elesa was dumbfounded and laughed in disbelief, she never saw anyone win so much! If this wasn't her Darling, she'd make the call and have his legs broken! - RuffyRaph21dコメントshould i take out the sex part or nah?
- RuffyRaph21dコメント
What Ash said!!!
Misty hugged the eggs, sighing, "This is a huge gift, okay?! That Crystal…" she looked at Brock, whose hands were glowing green! Brock was dumbfounded, "Power Viridian?!" Ash scratched his head, "What's that?" - RuffyRaph21dに返信 Monsterb620
Lugia isn't a water type
EDIT!!! Can you guess which two Pokemon Misty and Brock will get?! - RuffyRaph22dコメント
It was good. I like how you build their character instead of making them a single-use consumable to move the story. It gives a bit more life to their actions.
3- How do you guys like the more psychological inner monologue that was throughout the first portion of the story? Was it good? Was it bad? - RuffyRaph23dに返信 Mrweepknight
Crazy? I was crazy once, they locked me in a room, a rubber room, a rubber room filled with rats, and rats made me crazy.
Ace was stunned and retorted, "What do you mean 'Not training for Pokemon'???" Noibat waved his wings and clapped them, snorting, "Noibat!" Ace grabbed his little body and squeezed him like a stress doll, making his eyes bulge, "This is called Body Training! How can you learn powerful moves without a powerful body!? You think I'm crazy?! Crazy?! I was crazy once!" - RuffyRaph26dコメント
Looks like I found the reason I left this in chapter 2 :/
『Ding! Congratulations!!!! You have gained a Unique skill called Incubus King.』