poopyscoopy123
Lv3
2021-06-28 入りましたUnited States
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ライティング
68.3h
読書の
1574
本を読む
バッジ
6瞬間
10
poopyscoopy1231yrコメントBeside her was a small child that looked around my age. She had short white hair and black eyes.- poopyscoopy1231yrコメントこの段落は削除されました。
- poopyscoopy1231yrコメントAfter going into the front yard I saw my instructor. She had long white hair tied up into a ponytail like my dad. She had a black tattoo that looked like a lightning bolt and was smoking a cigar. When looking into her cold black eyes It felt like she was staring directly into my soul.
- poopyscoopy1231yrコメントRight next to her was a man around the same age as her. He had his white hair tied back and was smoking a cigar. His eyes seemed to be transparent.
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- poopyscoopy1232yrに返信 Kalawang
I just changed it, look again.
この段落は削除されました。 - poopyscoopy1232yrに返信 RexHarris
Ok, I'll change it to around the academy which would seem more reasonable.
この段落は削除されました。 - poopyscoopy1232yrに返信 SwordGod007
Sorry. But when I said that the plot was 4 years before the original plot I thought that meant that the MC was 4 years older than naruto. And in the synopsis, I said that this naruto might have a slightly different timeline than the original. Sorry again.
この段落は削除されました。 - poopyscoopy1232yrに返信 BlackKingJadeCh 1 Rebirth
- poopyscoopy1232yrコメント
+1
A - "Yes," Shinji planned to join and get the rank of Chunin as soon as possible. He will train moderately hard during these two weeks as he plans to spend some time with his teammates to make sure they're all for the Chunin Exams.