Laxmi_narayan

I like this very much from start of plot so, Please I request you to continue this story till the end because after many long time I have found such a good story

I like this story and I think you can add Telekinesis or Psychokinesis, Invisibility like Martian Manhunter, Bio-Force Field like Superman, Biokinesis for many things like Death Touch and Life Touch, Girls Body Manipulation and you also gain Perfect Body and Perfect Copy of Denial Park.

I think you also included 1st world Underworld in list were you can get three Bloodline of Vampire Wolf and Immortal to gain Immortality, Eternal Prime Condition and Eternal Youth with perfect Vampire Bloodline

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you can use Telekinesis as Invisibility ability like Martian in DC by Reflx Light from its surroundings.

I think you should give him Essence of Home for a personal pocket dimension were Mc and future wife can live because in real world two same face people is not that scientific or realistic and with his personal Pocket dimension he can make home or Castle for future family of his

Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Ginny Weasley, Cho Chang, Fleur Delacour

what are Powers of MC and I think Doomsday will be better with power Manipulation/Duplication/Copy/Bestowal and Acausality for Conquest

black color brown please and Infinite Sign as loga

Biokinesis + hormones manipulation + perfect D + personal home dimension