Arif_207

Overall, this is quite an enjoyable read. The writing is understandable although there are rare instances where there are mistakes. The story develops at a nice rate and the character design is pretty good as well. I personally, don't like having to read about all the races at the beginning, but that's just me. Overall, its a great novel and keep doing you thing it seems like its gonna work out for you.

This is the author. Thanks for reading this novel if you enjoyed stick around, add to your library ill be updating with a chapter everyday, and trying my best to improve with every chapter. If you enjoyed I'd also appreciate if you left a review.

Even though this type of novel isn't something I would go out of my way to read, I was so engaged the whole time and the characters are ten out of ten. This novel just needs more chapters and it would continue reading it. Although, I wouldn't go out of my way to read it from the genres especially the title and cover-in my opinion they don't do this story justice.

I like the setting of the world and the characters, also the pacing is nice it's not too slow or too fast. The writing quality needs to improve though-I recommend the Grammarly app it helps with simple punctuation and synonyms. If the writing quality improves I'm sure many people and I would enjoy this novel.

This isn't my type of novel.The concept is really good and the writing quality although the vibe is just not for me The characters just brush aside the murdering so its not my type of novel but it would be great to whoever liked this type

The characters I like and the writing quality is good.I felt the mystery and action at the start then when they entered the new place I felt the adventure aspect of it.Overall really liked it and I was engaged.The new place didn't have a lot of chapters but I know when there are more chapters released I'll really enjoy it.

This is the author,please give feedback on the novel and what you think of it so far and if you wanna see something in it later on.Ik its pretty vauge so far but i feel like it would turn into a sick novel.

comment what you think so far what yu wanna see

let me know your thoughts of this prologue ik its pretty vague so far but i can guarentee this will be a sick novel.