Ram800

Okay so this novel shows a very clear lack of flow. A couple of chapters in and everything just happens, a example is the very first chapter where he instantly forgets his old family and thinks of becoming the strongest. The reason is because he has memories of the body he possessed showing him to be in DxD. Another part that bothered me was the fact that he suddenly revealed critical info to jiraiya without proper reason of why he did that. I’m not sure whether or not the writing becomes better, but I do know is that the beginning wasn’t very good. So take how y’all want.

The funny thing about this is that amount of times I see translators get hate for not translating the names. Like I saw this one Genshin impact fanfic with a Chinese name and people complained for it to be changed. Things like this happens a lot.

Great story, nothing much to say other than the lack of updates.

I think idea is good, but the MC looks like a place holder, something that could be replaced. The other characters seem more interesting then him. There was one point someone else brought up, being the lack of will to train even basic things such as self defense. Usually considering this type of fanfic, it being a resutant based novel and having a feeling of a slice of life. But there’s a problem what would happen if he needed to defend himself or the shop. Just hope for there to be someone in his shop who has the will to protect it? What if they were weak what then? In the end my problem is the MC. These things could’ve been prevented if learned about him like why is he like that or what reason did he have to not worry. Just because he doesn’t think that there could be danger?All these problems are interlinked to what I see as the mine source of these issues. The fast pace. All in all I like the idea, and the characters, sadly the most important one was the one lacked compared to the rest.

Other than the translation which I find good, the story itself shows off a strong start of a average Chinese novel. The nationalism that it shows a measly two chapters in, or how the characters react by showing a attitude of superiority, is just isn’t for me.

Never played Genshin, but this is simple enough for me to read and understand what’s happening. It very good nothing much to criticize, the translation is amazing, the simulations are very interesting. Of course there are simulations that are little too much for me, a example is the Barbara one, but that’s about it there’s a couple more that were a little much, but it wasn’t enough for me to drop.

I been reading fanfics for about a week, since taking a break for a couple months, but this is the only one that made a laugh from BS.

This is for a Chinese fanfic is pretty good and the Mc is very enjoyable.

I was curious if I should know the original plot to enjoy this story, mind you I vaguely remember reading something with this title only it was a manhua.

Thanks for the chapter