I tried reading this per a review, I couldn't get past the second chapter. It was truly a garbled mess. I thought the grammar in the last story I read was bad, but I was oh so wrong!!! Attempting to decipher the English and what was trying to be conveyed in this story literally made my head hurt. There's no way I am willing to pay for this. Fix it and maybe we can talk, but until then, it's going to be a HARD NO for me!