Mediocre_author

Right out the gate, you do a great job introducing your story and you have great writing style. I'm grateful for the opportunity to read your story!

Wayyy better than a lot of the stuff I see on here. The story's progressing nicely, the dialogue feels fairly natural, and you've done a great job creating the setting. Good job!

Great story! My biggest complaint about this novel so far is that I didn't read it sooner! Overall, great job and I'm sure the rest will be just as good!

Great concept and great world building. Your writing style fits into the Webnovel platform great and it's honestly a shame that you haven't gotten as much publicity as you deserve, even if it is a fairly new novel.

Excellent use of vocabulary. The author clearly has a command of the English language. Right from the start, the story's captivating and pulls you in. Great job so far!

Thank you so much! I appreciate it!

Great world building, and good writing style. I think you'd really benefit from an editor though, not cause you're a bad writer, but just because there's a few things that don't seem normal for a native english speaker. You're really phenomenal though. Keep it up!

Great first chapter! I know I'm way late to this novel, but I'm excited to read the rest of it!

I love the author's writing style. It's short and concise without losing the detail of a longer paragraph. Although the story's not the most unique thing in the world, it's really well portrayed.

Haha, of course. You're killing it!