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Although humans are victims, if given strength or immortality, he would forget all his morals. What keeps us calm is the fear of the law. If there is no, there will be neither peace nor love
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This move is exactly what makes any stupid novel like this fall flat. MC accepted a job and completed it, since he plays the character of a hunter and a mercenary, so he does not enter into his feelings for hope. It would have been better to make the owner of the body an original MC instead of this idiot who comes from another world.
I reached Chapter 26 and my brain cells were close to burning. He was doing very silly things. By God, the author, in Chapter 25, instead of covering his face with anything, he rushed like an idiot without thinking and without caution and gave his face to everyone so that they could recognize him, and he gave his face to the murderer and she fled as if he was not even thinking about this possibility. Frankly, until now, I have not met any novel at the level of the world of lord of the mysteries, and the caution that any MC who has knowledge of this world must take, if he does not have great knowledge of the world, he can be excused. Anyway, if a person here can read a novel without paying attention to the details and other things, this is good for you and I envy you because you will read it normally and will not care about his silly mistakes.
I don't know if I'm the one with the problem, or if MC just takes actions without thinking it through when he goes to help others, he just came out of a big fight over him, and on top of that, he lost his mask which leads to him being exposed. I'm sorry to criticize so much, but it's too much. This is considered a conspiracy shield and makes things easy for him and makes everyone he meets good.
Yes, I see a lot of loopholes, but it is normal, nothing is really perfect. I just want to mention that the farther he is from people he does not know, the better, and acting coldly towards his colleagues in order to keep them away and create a safe distance is better than these actions authors, anyone who once ventures into the world of mysteries and horror. The madness in him makes you wary of everything, and here he is mixing with every person as if he were a naive . In addition, appearances are deceiving, and even if you want to portray the characters, you must portray them as human or deranged, depending on their path, etc., anyway, so far I am following and there is nothing wrong with it so far. I just hope that mc will be better. In the future
A good first novel makes the encounters logical and utilitarian instead of the MC getting out of control because he met a heroine or someone else, which makes him help her and give her information randomly just to appear posh and give him attention as if he has an inferiority complex.
If you are looking for the novel Game of Thrones or its world, turn around and search elsewhere. This is a novel that only bears the name of the series and has nothing to do with the series.I'm just saying this so you don't waste your time, especially since she's kind of Chinese, haha, so I'm saving you from this ridiculousness.
Your character building is weak. I think you tend towards Chinese novels unconsciously instead of establishing the character of the hero and his development and having a philosophy because of his childhood and other things. Then he started wanting to become a hero from a young age and these things.
The story is good, despite the fact that the author is very arrogant and annoying in the way he speaks and does not accept criticism from readers. Therefore, it can be said that the author is talented, despite some points in MC and others, his personality is annoying.
A novel that consists of romance and impure s*x, not pure love, etc., just a novel about MC and Jin having s*x, as if you are watching P*rn. Unfortunately, I do not understand whether the readers have not touched a girl before or do not know the positions of s*x, instead of dropping these things in a novel.
It is infuriating that he has such a great desire for the Flying Thunder God technique. I find it a very powerful technique, but couldn’t the author have been more creative in his method of fighting instead of his obsession with a technique like this?