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Stantheman1323 years agoに返信 SanchoPanzaSauce?
- Stantheman1323 years agoに返信 boom_boom_8806
Just read the manga for So I'm a spider so what
- Stantheman1323 years agoに返信 oday_farid
jazz lmao
- Stantheman1323 years agoコメント
how do u make text bold and italics on webnovel? please tell me, i need to know lmao
- Stantheman1323 years agoコメント
oh that head bruh
- Stantheman1323 years agoに返信 Black_Jesus_0229
some might even say that penguinz are swimming in it right now
- Stantheman1323 years ago発表
The concept of this novel is great. However, there are a few flaws. First off, the character of Anya has a few moments of immaturity that don't really fit the vibe she gave off at first. Second, the grammar, while readable, does contain a few small mistakes that need to be corrected in each chapter. That should be fixed. Overall a very good start though
この本は削除されました。 - Stantheman1323 years ago発表
(says chapter 2, i read all 5 chapters on my phone but am writing on my computer) My only problem with this is that it's too short right now :\ i love this novel so far, it's a really nice read so far and the double main characters/pov makes it even better and even more interesting. I have no problems with the grammar as well, the writing flows fairly nicely. Can't wait to see how this story is fleshed out, and to read further interactions between our 2 protagonists
