Aaron_Stone98

The story is really interesting if you ignore the Superman/Kryptonian part. Author, I would suggest editing that part and instead of Kryptonian/Superman physique let him have Sentry's powers, because currently he has been using technology to solve problems. That way apart from Superhuman physical powers, he can also have the other powers that you are exploring, because the Sentry has reality warping powers to some extent. If you change that part of the story, the other readers who have given low reviews won't have any problem either. Keep up the good work, and I hope you take my suggestions.

Oh he did find a girl earlier, but the author simply killed her for shock factor.

Chinese Fanfictions, they all go bad at some point.

MC

I know you are trying to make the MC funny, but he just comes off as retarded. Please tone down the cringey stuff a bit. Otherwise this is a very good story.