Roopa_sree
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2021-06-04 入りましたGlobal
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Roopa_sree2yr発表The concept of your story is fresh as the world background is quite interesting with the different countries and creatures. The sentences can be shorter as writing long sentences make it confusing.The character background is quite good but I hope more information is given as the story progresses!Overall great story:)
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The description is AWESOMEEE
The sun shone with gentle radiance, melting the fog and casting a breath of vitality into the biodiversity. Dairy trucks drove on the vacant streets, delivering packets of milk to each household. A newspaper boy pedalled his bicycle, carrying a bundle of newspapers behind him.