I liked the novel, you can tell the author is experienced, not doing the beginner mistakes. As the story is in very early stages, I can only comment on the plot, which is very nice, both characters are well thought of, with strong personalities. The thing I am most excited to find out is who will fall in love first. I am looking forward to get my answer.

I love these kind of stories, goody two shoes heroes are so boring. This is the equivalent of hitting the G spot, really liked it. 10/10, would recommend for sure.

Fell in love with the book from the summary only, the plot is amazing, it still might be too early to tell as not a lot of chapters have been updated but I am willing to take a risk, if you like the royalty genre this book is probably for you. And I think the summary can explain this novel better then I will ever be able to.

prepare for trouble, and make it double -team rocket maybe

An OP mc who can beat Royal guards bare handed 😂😂😂, waiting to see what else can he do other then stopping stones mid air. And we already have a cute waifu 😂😂😂.

I usually only read books with a lot of action, fights and kame hame ha's, and I thought this one was also about that, but it caught me by surprise 😂😂😂, the book is good and I liked it. Waiting for more chapters, gimme more.

I Like the premise, waiting for more chapters to be released. If you are here, thinking whether or not to read it, it is at the very least worth a try. Will keep coming back for more.

I really like the premise, I like different spins on myths and legends, and Fenrir is one of my all time favorites from Norse myth, T_T my hopes are very high.

Loved the story. Everything happening in the mc's life was explained beautifully. I just loved listing to mc's thoughts all the time lol but overall this story has a lot of potential and it is going in the right direction.

Maybe add a comma in the last line,

Point of view switch is very sudden, just mention who is talkning before changing point of view

From the style to its structure, this novel is superb. It has the grammatical format that is just my spot of tea! The storyline flows from one chapter to another to create a holistic and cohesive plot that almost drives itself

Too many ands lol

Your novel is amazing too, Thank you for taking out some time out of your schedule to read my work.

The first chapter was amazing, I had a different image of MC and the image changed as I kept reading through the chapter. I really like this type of writing, The chapter made me ask questions and I want to find answers. First chapter was enough to convince me that the story has potentials

I liked the novel first chapter had a good hook. Keep writing and improving good luck...................................................................

had

add his father here