Juliet_Fredricks

next chapter please😭😭😭😭 I really want to know what Jared true identity is. and the Liberian who only Breta knows about. I'm dying from suspense.

Thanks. I took your advice and did some serious editing (been on it since morning😅)although I haven't edited the previous chapters. I plan on doing that though, I just published another chapter(edited), check it out and tell me how it is.

Omg I love this book. it's so captivating

ok I'll keep reading I promise and when you improve I'll give another review.

Hi, I am the author of this novel. Please give me honest reviews and don't sugar coat your reviews, i don't mind criticism. If you like this story please support me.

Thanks for the review I'll work on my mistakes

thanks for the review I'll work on my mistakes

please can you give me pointers please This is my first novel and I really need all the help I can I get

If this is a translated story then no comments on grammer, but if it's not then I must say your grammer construction needs some work. Get a proofreader to read your work before publishing. I'd give you an honest review, i couldn't read the first chapter finish because of the grammer but I'll try reading the next chapter though. But over all it seems interesting keep up the good work. Also the book cover could really turn people off, Change it.

thanks I'll make sure to make some improvements