Daniel_Lane_4048

Uh Oh, The Plot is Thickening. Seems it's time for our pal Clay to fight.

It's alright my man! Errors happen to our text sometimes😄. Shoot I used to use an editing software and it left a HUGE wall of text at the end of every chapter😄 so you aren't alone. Don't let it discourage you buddy, keep pushing!👍

Very good start to the story, I'm definitely going to enjoy reading more. And on the first chapter I think you have an error with your editing software, it left a bunch of text🤣

Amazing Amazing Amazing Wording. 👏

This is a fantastic story, I love the way the beginning is starting out. The characterization, the imagery and the writing quality are good for the story. I hope this gets more recognition

Amazing World Buildings, Great Characters, and fantastic humor quality however, the dialogue could use a little improvement. Other than that this story is great and I look forward to keep reading it.

I absolutely love this story, I'm going to enjoy the constant updates for these chapters. Keep it up man, and I hope for succsses as you continue to write this story!

Thanks for the review👍. And while the stuff I'm introducing might see random it's there for future story arcs and I'm glad you like the story🙏.

This is where I think my story is currently at. Also I'd like to add chapters will be added on here weekly rather than daily. If you have any constructive criticism or positive comments I will take them. Thanks🙏

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you like the story🙏