Drsanders

bro is a menace, thats sexual assualt

god she just keeps screaming and crying

suchlike?

not sure if even author knows.

so its a helpless female with no choice but to be with someone she promised to tear apart becuz hes strong? are we supposed to like this wraven guy? Am i supposed to care about ashers, ashera, aquira??? not even sure about the mc name...

haunt- should be hunt.

seems to have misspelled the name again. aquira?

"it indicated ashera." Bad grammar here. The whole paragraph needs work on the wording and grammar to make sense. my only understanding comes from assumptions as to what the author means.

seems that the name of the character was misspelled to ashers?

also didn't notice, but groin is misspelled