It would be nice if the main character's communication with Hazbin Hotel characters increased a little bit, the story grows only around the MC, it would be better if you change this

This story better than my imagination. I hope you are happy with your story it is funny and characters feels true. Thanks 4 chapter

Thanks 4 chapter

Thanks 4 chapter

Proud and spoiled? That girl is the princess of hell, what do you expect from her? You'd be much spoiled if you had half the position he has. And don't think about using the argument that they have a bad personality. They are devils, of course their personalities will not be like angels.

Now mc in which year. (Similar the Charlie or older than her ,and I can understand why harem. Hazbin hotel isn't have a lot of ladies. I haven got problems with harem just I can't see which ladies he will love interest )

It hurt. I hope it change to being love interest one day.

I love her style. Is Beelzebub any love connection with mc?

I feel it will be good story and I must respect hazbin hotel and helluva boss ff's they are the best cartoon I have ever watched. . .

I love her style is Beelzebub any love connection with mc

Last question is "Beelzebub" Queen Bee in helluva boss

Thanks 4 chapter

I don't mind if MC is not a benign good like illness, but don't forget that they are in hell and there are bad people there. Even his parents have killed who knows how many people. So, it would be more believable if MC is good to the people he loves and feel nothing about random people in the street. Death in hell is a fact of life .(And if possible, MCs, who are the embodiment of goodness even if they have their own wishes, do not seem realistic to me) I hope you do not understand what I wrote as an insult. Hazbin Hotel was a series that I enjoyed watching very much, so I want the characters and the world to be realistic.

I think it would be better if MC's character was different from Charlie. I was also wondering if Charlie will be in the story or was MC born instead of Charlie? I think mc should be not male version of Charlie

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Good to see hazbin hotel ff

İt feels true . Thanks 4 chapter

Don't drop (I am ill, and I haven't got idea 4 what am I writing)

Welcome home I wish U have more time for webnovel . I love all hazbin hotel fanfics, and I hope any of them drop

Thanks for new chapter