AugustusLurie

Sympathy seems out of place when hes planning to kill off kids

Ffs every.single.time

There is so little details in this book. How about your vertical and horizontal administrative divisions? Except for mentioning provinces theres nothing else

????? Wasnt rome established like a few months max a few years ago. Again, chatgpt style work

Its so annoying that there are literally 0 details

Microscopes need glass. How did he develop a sustainable glass industry. This is impossible.

You still havent introduced the tribes size (neither the armys size)

Tbh for a great empire, rome isnt a perfect capital city. For an empire centered around the mediterranian, sure, but for the rest of the world, its geographical location is only limiting. Id say itd have to be somewhere around the current Frankfurt or Paris area or anything in between like luxembourg but luxembourg is too hilly to create a big city (for european dominance)

I mean alright but this is basically a no brainer op mc. Like zero challenge. If he wants to assassinate anyone he can, he can destroy armies by himself, he is immortal and can control minds. And as a bonus he has physical enhancements and his abilities will never be a burden on him (infinite chakra)

Westeros.... is in the west