Really good story, so far how it going! Author create a lovely and interesting interactions between characters. We need more chapters!

nice reference

Morgan*

Pretty good start for the story. Interesting choose of ability for the mc. Waiting for more chapters

Yeah Baby! I was waiting for crossover with this world. It will be interesting to see Leylin in this story.

Thanks for the chapter, waiting genin arc(MC wil be in team 7 or in team with oc characters)

As a fun of Naruto and JJK i recommend to read this peace of art! Author made a great job to create likeable MC, we see how character development is going in the story. Finally 10 Shadows best cursed technique in JJK, additionall respect for author to explain and explore the depths of this unique technique.

Maybe time to get some Familiar like dragon or snake(basilisk)

Thanks for the chapter

One of the best TDG fanfics, like the idea of villain system. And yeh f*ck Ne Lie.

+1

yes

It would be interesting to see Aikara acting and filming alongside Aqua. This can be done when they filmed a manga series where the main character was Dude model (I don’t remember the name), and Aqua played a stalkеr. I would advise replacing the model with Aikaru so that he plays the main role with Kana.

+1

Very good fic. The fic has a good start and the author explains some details of the story along the way. Good grammar and very important point for me- the protagonist is not OVERPOWERED!

All i can say for now that fan-fic is good,and it really unpopular (don’t know the reason)

Stay strong author, you doing great for now

I like overall how it is starting, Pic of mc from windbreaker manhwa. If there will be any references to manhwa or just mc appearance?

I think it good decision, staying human and achieving nothing or being devil and have power and long life.

It’s pretty reasonable, sometimes i don’t how other mc getting strong and unlocking Touki just by doing some trainings(without being supernatural being)