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TheManUnderTheBed5hに返信 Agent_WolfzYeah
(AN: I'm thinking of doing a little time skip after this. I think it's appropriate, get right into the gritty stuff and continuing the war. It's gonna be different from canon, if you're wondering about certain plot holes like Anakin still being on the planet, there is always a back up plan to get him off planet so not to worry. Try not to think about it too much I don't. I hope you've liked the little mini arc of character development. It's been pretty long to write but I've been doing my best 🥲. Anyway I hope you liked the chapter, next chapter will be more battles and Jaden finally training for the first time in a while. Don't worry the holocron didn't get destroyed.)- TheManUnderTheBed1dに返信 Grrrrrrrrr
I know but it would still be considered polite to invite them That’s why Viserys welcomed him as an equal
"Your Grace," he said, "House Martell is honoured to be here." - TheManUnderTheBed1dに返信 2CENTURY_GAMINGCh 28 Death Matches
- TheManUnderTheBed1dに返信 Gold_6707
If you want a spoiler then yeah the final fight of this will be Harry as the Master of Death.
"Promise you won't leave us." - TheManUnderTheBed1dに返信 THOT_SLAYER70
You should reread and see how aura tether works.
Daemon's flames burned brighter than before as he prepared for the fight. The true battle had now begun. - TheManUnderTheBed2dに返信 THOT_SLAYER70
The amount of aura he gets is different every time, if someone has 20% aura remaining when he activated spoils of war then he’d only get something below 20%.
Daemon's flames burned brighter than before as he prepared for the fight. The true battle had now begun. - TheManUnderTheBed3dに返信 THOT_SLAYER70
There are more parts to this fight than you’re considering. Aura doesn’t make him invincible he’s just very strong, but being careless could get him killed. He’s fighting two Kingsguard they are in the top 10 fighters in Westeros for a reason. He’s also on a battlefield where anyone could take advantage of any lapse in his defence. When using ryu the nen flows to different spaces making it thicker in some places while thinner in others. It’s how they attack and defend most of the time. If he uses up his aura too much then even regular Aura uses might be able to penetrate his aura. There are a lot more pieces to think about when on a battlefield it’s not just a straight on fight you have to consider what you’ll do after which is why no one starts off using their full power.
Daemon's flames burned brighter than before as he prepared for the fight. The true battle had now begun. - TheManUnderTheBed4dに返信 Trace7187
Smut at times is part of the story, the natural progression of a relationship. That being said I don’t usually do that much smut that it interferes with the story. The worst when it comes to that is probably my Viking one but that’s a bit different.
(AN: Jace has Hugh Hammer in his service and now is making his gold. He's doing well I reckon and he now has his sights set on a knighthood. Jace is pretty single-minded and every since Valyria he is fearless. He came face to face with death and accepted it, after that how could he be afraid of anything. So don't be surprised if he tries to enter the melee and the joust as a mystery knight. I hope you enjoyed the chapter.) - TheManUnderTheBed4dに返信 THOT_SLAYER70
Why would he want weak abilties? Plus they’re trying to leave everyone into a trap. By slaughtering aura users he’d be turning the tide of battle and the other army would retreat ruining the plan. It was already explained when they went over the battle plan.
Daemon moved through the battlefield with deadly efficiency, his sword cutting down enemy soldiers with brutal precision. A soldier lunged at him with a spear, but Daemon sidestepped the attack and brought his sword down, cleaving the man's head from his shoulders. Blood sprayed, and the body crumpled to the ground. Daemon didn't pause, moving on to his next target. Three soldiers charged at him, weapons raised. Daemon met their charge head-on. His sword flashed, severing the arm of the first soldier at the elbow. The man screamed, blood spurting from the wound, but Daemon was already driving his blade into the chest of the second attacker. The third soldier hesitated, fear in his eyes, but Daemon didn't give him a chance. He spun, his sword cutting through the man's throat in a spray of blood. - TheManUnderTheBed4dに返信 John_Smythe_4059Ch 18 Acceptance
- TheManUnderTheBed4dに返信 Assasins13_Perez
That part of him was living just for the sake of survival. It was purely selfish and it was what was urging him to leave the planet and not help anyone. He does accept it and recognises how it got him to this moment but he wants to try and be someone else now.
Ch 18 Acceptance - TheManUnderTheBed5dに返信 Habutheri
Yeah I felt like it was kinda sad how she died.
(AN: So this chapter was a little cringe, but tbh I didn't know how to make it not cringe, they are teenagers so it's kinda hard, most kids are cringe. Anyway Jaden had trouble using the light side of the force as he had this internal conflict raging within him, Satele knew this but wanted him to figure it out by himself. Now that he's sorted it out his ability to channel the force will improve and he won't have to rely on the dark side so much. Jaden wants to save everyone, but he's still in a war and he'll have to learn that he can't always save everyone. I hope you enjoyed the chapter, cya) - TheManUnderTheBed5dに返信 Habutheri
Up until that point I think I meant 🤷🏻♂️
'But many people would've died if you had not been present.' - TheManUnderTheBed6dに返信 The_Honored_One
That’s what I was saying all Demigods have a baseline strength and speed I wasn’t comparing them to humans but to each other. But if one of their parents was Heracles then they’d obviously have a higher level of strength than the others. It’s the same concept here. I’ve said multiple times on My AN that Thorfinn will be stronger than a regular human but he will be known for his speed because of his godly parent.
Ch 29 Magic - TheManUnderTheBed7dに返信 Habutheri
I made the mistake of assuming people knew about the battle of Jabiim before reading this. Obi wan isn’t dead. He’s been kidnapped by Ventress onto another planet. This is what happened in Canon.
Jaden then turned around and smiled "Come then let us go," he said as he walked through the muddy terrain with Aubrie and Zule at his side as he was informed about the current events of the planet; most recently being the battle at Shelter Base and the deaths of various Jedi —most notably Master Sirrus and Master Obi-wan Kenobi. Jaden couldn't help but feel a little more nervous than before, he didn't think war would be easy, but he didn't expect the republic to be losing like this 'Jedi are incredibly powerful and yet here they are dropping like flies,' he thought to himself. He just hoped he didn't suffer the same fate as all these masters; he definitely wouldn't because he didn't plan on fighting, he would get out of here. - TheManUnderTheBed10dに返信 Zeroren
I think you’ve misunderstood what I’ve written. The idea is that the mothers won’t discriminate against any of their children. So Hild would be the mother of Rebekahs child just as much her own. Any woman againsr that would leave, not her child just her. Thorfinn will still raise them all.
Thorfinn nodded once more as he began thrusting upwards in a vain attempt at penetrating her. "All the women you make mothers must raise all the children as if they are their own, any who do not will leave," she said as she stopped grinding and looked down at Thorfinn emphasising the importance of this rule. - TheManUnderTheBed11dに返信 ThanatosGreekGod
Daemons the mc from my other fic I was probably writing them both at the same time 🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️
"Concentrate Jaden!" Satele chided as Daemon sat in the middle of the room with most of his clothing off, his entire body was soaked with sweat as he breathed heavily, part of this exercise involved messing with the environmental controls and turning the heat up extremely high.