dead_oop
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dead_oop2yrコメントI love that novel heh
Will was in the same situation as Zhang Ye now!- dead_oop2yrコメントCh 72 Trojan Horse
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Detective and mystery has always been my cup of tea, love how the author narrates the story. I was hooked from first few chapters This story was just too good, couldn't stop reading. Everything was in detail, the pacing was just perfect. I didn't see any grammatical errors, words were pretty simple, which made my imagination vivid and fun. MC keeps reminding me of my friend XD will recommend to him he will love this! I LOVE THE COVER. The title will attract any mystery lover. Great job! [img=update]
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veryyyyy
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This is just BEAUTIFUL~ Won me over in the first few chapters, it doesn't happen often. I love how you described everything. Emotions, their movements, surrounding are described perfectly. I love the characters~~ Also, I am wondering if the author is hitting us something with number 69 *smirks* There are some grammatical mistakes, if you fix that it's gonna be just perfect!
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Dont be shy step on that insect.
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o.O have a feeling Leo gonna die? i wish he does
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69.... *smirks*
この段落は削除されました。 - dead_oop2yrコメントCh 1 You can only have 2D friends if you want to be a Mafia Boss
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I- get me one plz :")
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What is even school without friends.... *sigh*
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This shouldn't be funny..... why am i laughing... author san u didn't need to explain that- XD
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I assumed he was bottom.............. but okay lets keep reading-
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Ayeeeee big brainzzz And the oscar belongs to:
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the exact same thing happened in my class.
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o.O that sounds better thank you!
'I heard there was trouble in norther territory, I should have dig in further, ' she thought. 'Why was I so lazy that time?' She muttered under her breath as she handed the towel to the maid. Now that she thought about it, her dad was acting really weird. "Liam, you stay here and note out all the mistakes. You guys get so stiff after holding your sword, think of it as part of yourself. That way you can slice anything with no trouble." - dead_oop2yr発表
There were many parts where I could relate to this. Young natives lead experiencing life and the setting as beautiful. You explained the characters and built the world really well. Mc is just perfect! And I think everything happened a bit fast, it would be better if you explained it in a bit more detail. Besides that I LOVE IT!
- dead_oop2yrコメントCh 3 PRETEND
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walking* ig
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