Cameron_Henderson_0639

ok story is great, two things though first is the main character going to fully get meliodes powers and second is that the chapters are a little short and don't progress much of the story through 12 chapters

so does he have all of the powers of meliodas or just full counter

ok is this translated cuz i can't think of i another reason for the names and quotations being so inconsistent.

maybe change to quotations instead cuz this sentence is chopping is the word I guess

it also makes one hard to catch like a fish

it good so far but the dialog choice with - at the beginning of the sentence feels off like it's not speach

yup don't like the galaxy shit at least with how the normal six eyes look at a distance look like normal blue eyes but galaxy eyes are just cringe

does that mean you changed six eyes

oh not a sky

oh no you text talk for a story