Willie_Prioleau

He was actually pretty good with Qi back in his day and sense he has only gotten stronger it wouldn't change what he once knew and Ray has been away training .for years so we don't know if he did some Qi training on his own.

she doesn't have to lie or anything she is their Queen.

I wanna see more of Quins powers against higher beasts and even other vampires. Wondering when the vapmire leader is gonna send anymore men to try to cause trouble for the Cursed Family

I haven't gotten through the whole book yet but he doesn't always rely on others and he makes teenager decisions.

I have to agree but it seems like a pretty go cliffhanger though

story is great keep it up still a little grammatical errors but great chaptef.

that os what the comments are for to tell the critisize them so when they actually go to publish a book they get it and allready have input.

so far so good alot of words that aren't needed and some misplaced