Emptyentity

You're making it so much easier for us.

Good luck finding something of this quality(grammar aside) that is fanfic and has more than 50k words. For me, only some of Jordinio's works are on par, but the release schedule is atrocious. His Multiverse Mayhem is pretty similar to this.

Bro was away for so long that he forgot that Eidolon is a teen himself. :D

Thanks!

A piece of advice: it's better to drop the third-person objective narration style; it's too much tell, never show. Use subjective or even omniscient. We, as readers, want some connection to the inner world of MC, and here, we get none. It's a character-driven story, not a thriller.

I don't mind either of them, but for a more coherent story, it would be better to have some training, planning, and whatnot. :D You don't even need to make it a year.